Writing Explanation

Plan:

I think scooters should be banned

Reasons:

1. The rebuild is taking up a lot of space, and there is too much crowding. That means a lot more people could get injuries.
2. Having scooters in school would make it harder for rules to be followed as they are a distraction.
3. There isn’t anywhere to put your scooter.

Dear Mr Sutton

Now I am going to tell you why I think we should not have scooters at school.

The rebuild is taking up lots of space and there is too much crowding. This means that there are a lot of people in the same spot and if people were scootering around they could crash into a lot of people. I think scooters should be banned because there isn’t enough room to use them safely.

Having scooters in school would make it harder for rules to be followed as they are a distraction. This means things like scootering around the classes so that everyone looks at you or if it is outside your class then someone could get distracted. So to keep students focused scooters should be banned at school.

There is nowhere to put your scooter. If you are in class and your scooter is just outside it is a tripping hazard. Also If there was a fire then people could trip over when they are trying to get out. Having scooters outside the classroom also makes it easier for someone to steal it. So if your scooter is stolen then your parents have to work harder to get you the money to buy a new one.

I believe students should not have scooters at school because it is too crowded, they are a distraction and there is nowhere to put them.

My number one reason that I don’t want scooters to be at this school because someone could get hurt by people doing tricks and racing around the school.

My other reason is that now that the rebuild has started there is not much room for people so they are all in the one place and people could go around there when they are on there scooters and hurt someone.

My third reason I don't want scoters at this school is because all of the construction there are not many paths so they have put down gravel paths. So if someone was scootering really fast and came round the corner and it was a gravel path well 1. They could keep going fast over the gravel and get fail off 2. They could go around and go into a busey places and might hurt someone.