Thank you for sharing your blog post with me! I enjoyed getting the chance to work with you for this project. I wonder how your work might have been improved if you and your partner got started on your DLO before today.
I wonder if you would have had time to add in some more images or make your text simplier for the children Miss Morgan will show your DLO to!
Hello Kalim! Me and Summer like how you structured your DLO and how you both explained how to make a good blog comment. However, maybe you could add some color and spruce it up a little bit.
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Kia ora Kalim
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your blog post with me! I enjoyed getting the chance to work with you for this project. I wonder how your work might have been improved if you and your partner got started on your DLO before today.
I wonder if you would have had time to add in some more images or make your text simplier for the children Miss Morgan will show your DLO to!
- Miss Birtch
Hello Kalim!
ReplyDeleteMe and Summer like how you structured your DLO and how you both explained how to make a good blog comment. However, maybe you could add some color and spruce it up a little bit.