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The Great Escape (First Draft)

Term 2 Week 3

W.A.L.T recall  events through the eyes of an animal.

Success Criteria

I know I will be successful when my recount has a

• Title
• Orientation:  When? Who? Where? Why?
• Sequence of events:  What happened? Describe using the senses (hear, taste, see, smell and feel).
• Personal Comment:  How did the event

First Draft

The Great Escape

It was a beautiful day on April the fifth at the savanna. We were coming back from migrating. So far it had been a great trip and we had not ran into any predators yet. Me, my son and my wife were at the head of the herd so we were in charge of them. If only this grass did not blind us from lions.  

I stopped because I smelled something and looked around I quickly turn my herd around because I saw a lion pride. I heard them  running towards my herd  so my herd ran as fast as they could. Then I saw them catch my son and he fell into the lake with the lion pride. They all circled my son and I could feel my anger taking over so I ran to get the herd so we would stand a chance. My son was swimming in the lake with the lions trying to get his horns off so that he would not fight back. Then a crocodile came into the fight my son must of thought that he was a stretchy band. After the crocodile let go of my son and the rest of the herd got back the lions started backing away from my son. One by one the lions started to run away but one of them did not so I ran at him and helped him get away from my son by giving him a huge push then my son was safe. After all that my son went through he went to  taste the grass so he could get his energy up.

Finally my son was safe with us, he looked really happy to see us but after all of that he survived from a pride of lions and a crocodile. But one day he will have to face his enemy once again, but we do not have to worry about that until the time comes.

Kalim's Animal Creation.

Zeemo

Habitat: African savannahs.

Diet: Omnivore

Zeemo eats meat and plant because it is a omnivore

Head: Rhino

Zeemo communicate using a wide variety of sounds, including grunts, growls, snorts, squeaks and bellows. and it use its big sharp horns to defend itself

Body: Zebra

They weigh from 227 to 272 km (500 to 600 lb), Zeemo can run 64 km (40 mi) per hour.

Legs: Cheetah

The world's fastest land animal, the Zeemo can go from 0 to 65 km (40 mi) per hour in three strides, with a single stride covering 7-8 meters (23-26 feet). Zeemo can reach full speed 110 km (70 mi) per hour in seconds.

Tail: Spider monkey

With a prehensile (grasping) tail and long fingers that they hook over branches.